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Monday, January 14, 2013

After watching Adora Svitak's TED presentation

(After watching Adora Svitak's TED presentation)

 "You are too childish "
 I often hears it until now.I do not like this word,and dislike people who are too childish.But after watching her presentation,I changed my mind.Why is childish so bad words and why childish people too bad?
After watching  it,I realized  it's not.
 To begin with,children has their own imaginary.
Did you read the novels that children wrote?Actually,there are really amazing stories too.
You can say it"s too childish,but after you understand children's huge imagination,it would  be fun.So I mean,do not even says childish and understand them.
 Next,there are nothing to stop children.As you know,children do not gives up easily as adults.But why you are saying it's childish?In other hand,adults give up too fast because they think some obstacles first.But children does not.Then, isn't is a good thing?"
  Finally,there are lots of things that adults should learn from us.
As I told,there are things that children could,but not adults can.Or things that children are better.
So I think they should learn together and make better life.

This is my thinking after I saw the presentation.
THANK YOU


2 comments:

  1. There are really too many small mistakes in your writing. You have not taken the time or put in the work to correct these mistakes (spelling, spaces, grammar).

    Please work harder to explain and show your thoughts in writing.

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  2. THANK YOU...!
    I think I will work more harder next...

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